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Everything looked so dark... I... I couldn't see anything... I could still seem to smell cats though... Wait... I thought I could see then. Yes I could see! I think I'm used to the dark. We entered the camp. A muscular black tom walked over to us. Sharpclaw sets me down on the ground. My paws squished the grass underneath them. I look at the muscular tom.
He asks Sharpclaw, "Who is this kit and what is she doing here?"
Sharpclaw replies, "Her name is Cloud and she will be living with us. Her pa-"
The tom growled, interrupting Sharpclaw, "I will decide if she stays here or not."
He looked at me and asked in a soft tone, "So your name is Cloud... Where are your parents?"
I replied, "My parents are alive, but they're not gonna come back for me..."
The muscular cat meowed, "Well... Since your parents aren't coming back then you will live with us. My name is Shadowstar. The leader of Darkclan. You will now be known as Cloudkit for now."
I nodded. Shadowstar looked at Sharpclaw then walks towards a tree with a high branch. He jumped up, landing on the high branch.
He yowled, "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey in the dark gather here beneath Highbranch for a clan meeting!"
Many different groups of cats came out of their dens and walked to Highbranch.
Sharpclaw meowed, "Follow me, Cloudkit."
He walked to Highbranch. I followed him. Once we got to Highbranch, Sharpclaw picked me up and jumped onto the high branch Shadowstar was standing on. He set me down on the branch carefully. Everyone looked at me for a few moments then they murmured to each other.
Shadowstar waited until everyone was finished murmuring then said, "We have a new member in our Clan. Her name used to be Cloud but she will now be known as Cloudkit until she becomes an apprentice then a warrior and maybe even leader. I want you to all treat her like kin. She has been through a lot. Sweetsong will take care of Cloudkit until she becomes an apprentice."
I looked around for Sweetsong then I saw a beautiful dark and light brown she-cat. I guessed that she was Sweetsong.
Sweetsong dipped her head and said, "I will take care of Cloudkit like she is my own."
Shadowstar nodded and jumped off of the branch, meaning that the meeting was over. Sharpclaw picked me up and jumped off of the branch as well. He set me on the ground. All of the cats got up and walk away going to a den, the forest, or somewhere to talk.
Sharpclaw smiled and meowed, "Welcome to the clan, Cloudkit."
He walked away towards a den. I walked towards where Sweetsong was. Sweetsong saw me and smiled, "Hello, Cloudkit. Follow me. I can't wait for you to see my kits and the other kits."
She walked towards a den and I followed. I saw a couple of kits playing outside of the den. All of them saw me and stopped playing. A brown kit with dark brown fur under his eyes walked towards me.
He smiled, thrilled to have another kit to play with, "Hi! My name is Lynxkit!"
Another kit that has grey fur came over and meowed, "Hi... Um... I'm Hawk-kit..."
An orange kit with white fur on his chin and stomach walked over as well and said energetically, "I'm Foxkit! I think you're pretty."
I blushed and meowed, "Thank you..."
Foxkit replied, "Welcome!"
Lynxkit asked, "What's your name? And why do you have white fur?"
Sweetsong mewed softly, "Her name is Cloudkit and it is impolite to ask a question like that."
Lynxkit muttered, "I'm sorry..."
I sighed, "It's ok..."
Foxkit walked over to the other kits, "They're Deathkit, Calmkit, Cherrykit, Wolfkit, Shykit, Dogkit, Bugkit, Swiftkit, and Frostkit."
He pointed at each of them with his tail as he said their names.
Shyit mewed, almost a whisper, "Um... Do you wanna play with us?"
I exclaimed, "Sure! What are you guys playing?"
Calmkit meowed excitedly, "Mossball. We can show you how to play it!"
The kits showed me how to play mossball. After a while I started to play with them. I thought in my head, 'This is so much fun!'

| Meanwhile |



"Claw... Claw... Wake up... Rock, River, and their kit got away... Wake up Claw..." A muscular white tom meowed.
Claw woke up with a groan. He rubbed his head a bit with his paw, then got up.
He growled, his voice a bit strained, "You lost them?"
The white tom sighed, "Yes... We are deeply sorry b-"
Claw caterwauled, the fur on his neck and along his back bristling, "How could you lose them!"
The tom stammered shaking in fear, "We-We're sorry Claw b-"
Claw slashed the tom's throat with his claws. He watched as a gurgled, "We...re...S-sorry...Claw.." Then he fell. Looking back up, Claw growled loudly, "You..."
The other cats shoved the black and white cat forward.
The cat mewed in fear, "Yes, Claw?"
Claw snarled, "You will lead these cats to find Rock, River, and Cloud. If you come back without anything to report about any of them then you will die. Understand?"
The cat nodded.
Claw yowled, "Go! Go find them now!"
The black and white cat scrambled out of the den, with the others following him. Claw turned around, looking at a painting of Rock, River, and Cloud on the wall of the den.
He snarled lowly, "I will find and kill you all. I swear on my life!"
After the threat, he slashed at the painting and made big, deep scratches on the wall.

| To Be Continued... |

Deathkit © :iconsilvytabitha: She is letting me use her OC in the story.

Cherrykit: Light brown fur with a white circle on her back and light green eyes. me

Shykit: Dark blue furred and dark blue eyes.

Swiftkit: Grey fur on stomach and chin rest is black. Has brown eyes.

Bugkit: Black fur and dark brown eyes.

Wolfkit: kind of looks like a wolf, black fur and brown eye

Dogkit: Black fur. Has a red marking that looks like a claw on both sides of his cheeks. Has brown eyes.

Frostkit: grey with white underbelly and muzzle and light blue eyes.

Cover: Coming Soon
Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2: Here
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8

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:icondawnstorm8:
Dawnstorm8 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
More! Gah I am so excited!
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Noobertk Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012
ooo intense O.O
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cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
LOL
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Its-a-stone-luigi Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
^^ it's interesting to read her past~!
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cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
THX! :) I don't have much time to do the 3rd chapter so yeah... But I'll probably start it soon! :)
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Its-a-stone-luigi Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
^^
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:iconcloudwolfanime:
cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
^^
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:iconits-a-stone-luigi:
Its-a-stone-luigi Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:heart: :dummy:You are now the founder of AdoptaWarriorsCouple~! : D :dummy: :heart:
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:iconcloudwolfanime:
cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
XD
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Its-a-stone-luigi Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
^^
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Dawnstorm8 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hey could my oc be in this?If you say yes she is a dark dark gray tabby she-cat with ice-blue eyes a half burn't face and tail tip and her fur is long.Name Darkshadow
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:iconcloudwolfanime:
cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Ok! Your cat is accepted! Do you cat want to start out as a kit, apprentice, or warrior?
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Dawnstorm8 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh yeah she not a tabby and shes short furred now I changed her design
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Dawnstorm8 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Warrior
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:iconcloudwolfanime:
cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Has been added to my Character list :3
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:icondawnstorm8:
Dawnstorm8 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Welcome! ^^
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KazWolf33 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think i love this one more then the other!!! I love how sweetsong acts to the kits. So loving and caring even when they do something they aren't supposed to do. Until i read more, i think she is the sweetest cat in darkclan. :D I LOVE IT!!!! :huggle:
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cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
THX! Yeah. I think so too :). She is the sweetest cat in Darkclan :) Her mate is so lucky... What do you think of Claw? Evil right?
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KazWolf33 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Deffinatly evil. Her mate is REALLY lucky! I wish i was her! lol so lucky! :D
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:iconcloudwolfanime:
cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I have a little hunt for you of Claw. Claw used to be in the Howling Tribe. N same!
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KazWolf33 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well most evil cats are like that. Like with tigerstar.
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:iconcloudwolfanime:
cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Yep! XD
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:iconkazwolf33:
KazWolf33 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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:iconcloudwolfanime:
cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Beware of Claw... OR else he will kill you! XD
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XxTwilightCryxX Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Do you really think a queen would name her kit 'Deathkit'? That would just be hateful of that kit.
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:iconcloudwolfanime:
cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Actually Deathkit isn't my character. The person let me have her OC in the story.
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KreKael Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oooooooohhhh yeeeaaaaahhhhhh!!!!!!!!
>:3
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:iconcloudwolfanime:
cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Yep! New chapter! XD You love it?
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:iconkrekael:
KreKael Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YESSSSSSHHHHH
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cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
XD
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:iconkrekael:
KreKael Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:p like the icat?
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:iconcloudwolfanime:
cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
icat?
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KreKael Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Like ipod. But i changed it so its icat. Its in mai gallery. I thought i put it in warriors take all. Hm.
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Zayllara Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your story is absalutley brilliant i love the way you write, i wonder what claw wants it so interesting!
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:iconcloudwolfanime:
cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Well :iconxxtwilightcryxx: helped me so you should tell him/her too. N about Claw... It's a secret... Here's a little tiny hint. Claw used to be in the Howling Tribe.
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silver-moonwolf Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Student General Artist
do you mean like how in the "WarriorS" Tigerclaw used to be in Thunderclan, Yellowfang used to be in Shadowclan and Greystripe used to be in Thunderclan? (sorry but thats all i know so far... i am just starting to read the fourth book after waiting for soooo long... ^^;)
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cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah kind of like that :)
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silver-moonwolf Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Student General Artist
oh cool
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cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
THX!
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silver-moonwolf Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Student General Artist
your welcome! :D
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cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:D
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Zayllara Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D i wish i could help edit D:
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cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
It's ok. You will find out why Claw wants to kill Rock, River, and Cloudkit later in the story. Only 1 person knows so far... But that's because we roleplayed and i had Claw, Rock, River, and Cloudstar in it... So yeah... Everything will all make sense later on...
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Zayllara Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Mk.. :P
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cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
;)
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Zayllara Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Deathkit!!!! :D
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:iconcloudwolfanime:
cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Yep! XD Deathkit/Deathpaw/Deathheart is gonna appear many times! XD
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:iconzayllara:
Zayllara Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is she your best friend.. :meow:
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:iconcloudwolfanime:
cloudwolfanime Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Yes then i think i''m gonna decide that she'll betray her later in the story. But when they're warriors though. I have a perfect idea for it XD
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